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Acknowledgments
This document is a result of my study and research during my graduate studies. Below are the key contributions I have received from the authors, institutions, and people that helped me throughout my journey.
- My supervisors, Dr. Smith and Dr. Jones, provided guidance throughout my research.
- The university's academic staff, including professors in both engineering and management departments, offered valuable insights.
- My thesis committee, consisting of knowledgeable faculty members, reviewed the work for accuracy and clarity.
I would like to extend my sincere gratitude to all these individuals who made this research possible. Thank you.
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